maple leaf
once a woodland umbrella
now carpets the path
caught between seasons
squirrel gathers nuts
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One Single Impression: Shift in Time
November 6, 2009 · 6 Comments
Categories: One Single Impression
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6 responses so far ↓
Marilyn // November 6, 2009 at 4:56 am |
A lovely first impression.
zoya gautam // November 6, 2009 at 7:46 am |
caught between seasons
once a woodland umbrella
now carpets the path ..
simply beautiful ! .
SandyCarlson // November 7, 2009 at 2:14 am |
From umbrella to carpet. A beautiful poem.
gabrielle // November 7, 2009 at 7:02 pm |
frenzied squirrels…i can empathize
Jukota // November 7, 2009 at 8:45 pm |
Kind of reminds me of Rome, the rise to the top, the fall. Great shift and a wonderful take on the prompt. Beautiful in its simplicity.
JanePoet ~ JP/deb // November 8, 2009 at 10:05 pm |
mmmm…beautiful ode to the season.