Comments for Deo Writer http://deowriter.wordpress.com Spark the Spirit Tue, 10 Nov 2009 04:36:20 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on Poetry Stretch: What’s Not There by JanePoet ~ JP/deb http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/09/poetry-stretch-whats-not-there/#comment-1604 JanePoet ~ JP/deb Tue, 10 Nov 2009 04:36:20 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=988#comment-1604 I have a special place in my heart for calicos ... particularly miss one that I grew up with. Lovely tribute to your huntress. Cheers, peace and love, JP/deb I have a special place in my heart for calicos … particularly miss one that I grew up with. Lovely tribute to your huntress.

Cheers, peace and love,
JP/deb

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by JanePoet ~ JP/deb http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1603 JanePoet ~ JP/deb Sun, 08 Nov 2009 22:05:28 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1603 mmmm...beautiful ode to the season. mmmm…beautiful ode to the season.

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by Jukota http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1602 Jukota Sat, 07 Nov 2009 20:45:07 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1602 Kind of reminds me of Rome, the rise to the top, the fall. Great shift and a wonderful take on the prompt. Beautiful in its simplicity. Kind of reminds me of Rome, the rise to the top, the fall. Great shift and a wonderful take on the prompt. Beautiful in its simplicity.

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by gabrielle http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1601 gabrielle Sat, 07 Nov 2009 19:02:08 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1601 frenzied squirrels...i can empathize frenzied squirrels…i can empathize

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by SandyCarlson http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1600 SandyCarlson Sat, 07 Nov 2009 02:14:35 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1600 From umbrella to carpet. A beautiful poem. From umbrella to carpet. A beautiful poem.

]]> Comment on Playing with the “Zeno” Poetry Form. by laurasalas http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/10/30/playing-with-the-zeno-poetry-form/#comment-1599 laurasalas Fri, 06 Nov 2009 11:33:01 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=961#comment-1599 This is beautiful! Love that elusive voice/evokes/tears. This is beautiful! Love that elusive voice/evokes/tears.

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by zoya gautam http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1598 zoya gautam Fri, 06 Nov 2009 07:46:58 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1598 <i>caught between seasons once a woodland umbrella now carpets the path</i> .. simply beautiful ! . caught between seasons

once a woodland umbrella
now carpets the path ..

simply beautiful ! .

]]> Comment on One Single Impression: Shift in Time by Marilyn http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/06/one-single-impression-shift-in-time/#comment-1597 Marilyn Fri, 06 Nov 2009 04:56:36 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=984#comment-1597 A lovely first impression. A lovely first impression.

]]> Comment on Scenes from a Pizza Joint by Linda http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/scenes-from-a-pizza-joint/#comment-1596 Linda Fri, 06 Nov 2009 03:27:22 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=981#comment-1596 The parts of the poems were delicious. I loved the images and the short order of everyone's lives. It reminded me of my days in the pizza store. Thanks for sharing. The parts of the poems were delicious. I loved the
images and the short order of everyone’s lives. It reminded me of my days in the pizza store. Thanks for sharing.

]]> Comment on Scenes from a Pizza Joint by davidmoolten http://deowriter.wordpress.com/2009/11/05/scenes-from-a-pizza-joint/#comment-1595 davidmoolten Thu, 05 Nov 2009 21:43:47 +0000 http://deowriter.wordpress.com/?p=981#comment-1595 I love the simple terse construction in these; the narrow form; the short lines; the abbreviated diction. It really heightens the irony given the calamity and squalor unfolding, and also fits the third person "indifferent" though not really point of view of the narrator. I love the simple terse construction in these; the narrow form; the short lines; the abbreviated diction. It really heightens the irony given the calamity and squalor unfolding, and also fits the third person “indifferent” though not really point of view of the narrator.

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