One Deep Breath: Frost

sparkle fringe outline
seize the diamonds-quick
vanish before us


frost dancers line edge
quickstep into the new year
pirouette and poof!

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11 Responses to One Deep Breath: Frost

  1. Tammy says:

    Another great picture with terrific haiku!

  2. Jane Poe (aka Deborah) says:

    A lively, lovely take on frost! JP/deb

  3. Sandy Carlson says:

    Poof is right! Beautiful poem. God bless.
    Writing in Faith

  4. Cloudscome says:

    Beautiful! I wanted to get out and photograph the frost this morning but the library was jumping to fast. Thanks for posting this.

  5. Kelly Fineman says:

    Phenomenal photo. Great haiku, but I especially love the “sparkle fringe outline” line.

  6. Inland Empire Girl says:

    I love the line ” sparkle fringe outline”.It goes with the picture so well. I hope you are feeling better.

  7. Roswila says:

    Ah, seize the diamonds, yes, we need to always do that … the moment is always melting even as we become aware of it … sorry, it’s my birthday tomorrow and I’m more than usually aware of the passing of all things (I’m turning 64) …

  8. tumblewords says:

    ah, dancing on the edge! a fine visual!

  9. spacedlaw says:

    I liove the nonchalance in the second one!

  10. qualcosa di bello says:

    a perfect match of verse & photo! a lovely shot…

    happy new year!!

  11. Crafty Green Poet says:

    Lovely frosty photo! I love your line ‘sparkle fringe outline’ too! Hope you’ve got over your cold and best wishes for 2008!

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