Combining Two Prompts

At Sunday Scribblings the prompt is  “aging”.  “Smoke” is the prompt at One Single Impression.  It worked out to combine the two.

smoke tendrils caress
facial lines aged, creased, alone
frequent cough, raspy
yellow fingertips
light the match once  more

Both sites have great takes on the prompts. Be sure to visit. 

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11 Responses to Combining Two Prompts

  1. Raven says:

    A portrait in words. Great take on the prompt.

  2. annie says:

    Joining the two together really works.

  3. zoya gautam says:

    ..”Soft and moody ”
    many thanks for sharing this..

  4. floreta says:

    great marriage of the two prompts. smoking definitely ages you! and a room too…

  5. sue says:

    this reminds me so much of my mother-in-law, now deceased.

  6. Amias says:

    This is indeed another good one!

  7. Sandy says:

    I think I know her! Great take on these prompts.

  8. SandyCarlson says:

    Soft and moody turned deadly. Thanks for the wake up call.

  9. This was so visual…wonderfully done!

  10. Tumblewords says:

    Excellent! Powerful imagery.

  11. Deceptively gentle opening image hides a stark poetic truth – smoke like that does tend to leave it’s mark!

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