Yesterday I went down a rabbit hole while working on a poetry project thus no writing or posting, except for revising poems.
fog rolls in on waves
seashore morn
salt air awakens
or
fog rolls in on waves
seashore morning, barefoot walk,
salt air awakens
More can be found at Haiku Heights.
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spring green buds burst forth
pollen count
rises, sneezes too
Since I’m fond of walking barefoot on the shore (on the rare occasions that I get a chance to do so, since I live in a desert!), I appreciate your second haiku.
“Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”
A well painted picture of a foggy day at the seashore. Thank you.
Oops. I forgot about that! Will edit and correct.
Well expressed ~ lovely ~ check syllables as this site looks for 5-7-5 ~ (there are many different types of haiku) ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^