NaPoWri Mo: Days 7 and 8

Yesterday I went down a rabbit hole while working on a poetry project thus no writing or posting, except for revising poems.

fog rolls in on waves
seashore morn
salt air awakens

or

fog rolls in on waves
seashore morning, barefoot walk,
salt air awakens

More can be found at Haiku Heights.

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spring green buds burst forth
pollen count
rises, sneezes too

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4 Responses to NaPoWri Mo: Days 7 and 8

  1. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Since I’m fond of walking barefoot on the shore (on the rare occasions that I get a chance to do so, since I live in a desert!), I appreciate your second haiku.

    “Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”

  2. elleceef says:

    A well painted picture of a foggy day at the seashore. Thank you.

  3. macrush53 says:

    Oops. I forgot about that! Will edit and correct.

  4. Well expressed ~ lovely ~ check syllables as this site looks for 5-7-5 ~ (there are many different types of haiku) ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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