SOL17: Tanka Tuesday


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ocean tidal zone
planting feet in pounding surf
breathe in, breathe out
all the negative ions
beginning the poem here

© 2017. Jone rush macculloch

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6 Responses to SOL17: Tanka Tuesday

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  2. VanessaVaile says:

    there’s definitely a water connection today — I just commented on Reflections on the Teche’s post ~

  3. cvarsalona says:

    Brings back to the ocean where tranquility exists, Jone-thanks…

  4. Fran Haley says:

    How lovely – the simplicity, the imagery, the release.

  5. lindabaie says:

    I love that you have that ocean near, Jone. This is lovely.

  6. Tara Smith says:

    I feel centered and calm just reading this, Jone…thank you!

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