Today’s prompt at One Single Impression is “walls” What walls do you have? Real? Imagined?
wall, a phantasm
between siblings, hands reach out
grasp, collide, forgive
talk over coffee
brick order cancelled
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One Single Impression: Walls
June 14, 2009 · 7 Comments
Categories: Haiku · One Single Impression
Tagged: Haiku, One Single Impression
7 responses so far ↓
Tammie // June 14, 2009 at 6:55 pm |
thanks for the chuckle = brick order canceled.
gautami tripathy // June 15, 2009 at 3:05 am |
That made my day!
filigreed walls
JanePoet ~ JP/deb // June 15, 2009 at 4:54 am |
Ah, the intricacies of familial relationships. The walls may be there, but let us hope the are temporary.
Peace and love,
JP/deb
SandyCarlson // June 15, 2009 at 11:07 am |
Wonderful poem. It’s great when such orders are canceled.
Sandy // June 15, 2009 at 8:17 pm |
What about hitting the wall?
We have so many ways to box ourselves in, don’t we?
Tumblewords // June 16, 2009 at 3:40 am |
Great! Great!
gabrielle // June 17, 2009 at 6:09 pm |
I’m happy to hear the walls were temporary, not yet brick and mortar.