Poetry Stretch this week is about “firsts” for the new year. A first for me is the discovery of Haiku Bones. It provides a weekly prompt much like One Single Impression but for the haiku in all of us.
Two poems came to mind. One is in honor of the 20 years since I met my husband.
winter’s first snowflakes
dance the twirl-a-whirl at dawn
hummingbirds tremble
seek refuge from cold
hidden in branches
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first trembling kiss
mountains and valleys the paths
a twenty year journey
Great Kid Books is hosting Poetry Friday. Haiku Bones list many responses to “trembling”. The Miss Rumphius Effect is writing poems about “firsts”.
oops! What I meant to say was Wow, you conveyed such a long journey in so few WORDS!
wow, you conveyed a long journey in so few years.
Love the twirl-a-whirl!
Mountains and valleys, indeed. We just celebrated a 20 year milestone, too!
Oh so beautiful! That first kiss…trembling (or fumbling as the case may be) and look where it has led!
I like them both!
What can be better than kisses and snowflakes?
Have you heard of Haiku very much? A friend of mine runs it and she sends out a weekly challenge:
http://haikuverymuch.com/
Love the snowflakes dancing the tilt-a-whirl. What a great image.