SOLSC17: 10/31, Poetry Friday: Winter, Please Depart

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I am working out an ode but it’s not ready.  I am guilty of beating myself  up for not getting it completed.  this morning, I reminded myself that I still have time.

So today a shadorma for based on the sights and sounds of this morning.

morning geese
sit on the pavement
robin’s song
fills the air
the rain today feels warmer
winter, please, depart.
©2017, jone rush macculloch

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7 Responses to SOLSC17: 10/31, Poetry Friday: Winter, Please Depart

  1. Shadorama? I learn something new here. It’s almost like a spell. Winter! Be gone!

  2. Yes, your poem speaks for me, too. It’s bitter cold here.

  3. lindabaie says:

    I will look up the form, Jone, and love about the rain feeling warmer. We are very warm & it will be continuing. Send a little of that warm rain our way please!

  4. Ramona says:

    A shadorma – a new form for me. I’ll have to see how it’s done. Those last three words are endorsed by me and almost everyone I know. It’s time. Goodbye, winter!

  5. Melody says:

    Yes please! Today’s cold weather here really made me feel done with winter! Very well done little poem!

  6. Yes, you still have time. 🙂 And while I wait, here’s this lovely shadorma I can enjoy—a new-to-me form. Thanks, Jone!

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